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Old 11-24-04, 02:12 AM   #2
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This was feedback posted for Dabatos

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well, as usual, all the battles that i think are good have been involving my crew members so i'm unable to vote...

i liked both drops... I.Mind, the only thing i would say you needed to do better was look at how you worded some of your stuff... you were on point with ya topic the whole way through and your examples were definitely truth

Verbal Abuse (you still hate me don't you?...lol) good drop... the prayer at the beginning added a good touch to your piece... with that said, you also did the complete opposite of I.mind... i thought you concentrated too much on the convo between G-d and Jacob S. and not enough on the actual commandments... the last line eluded to it but there's more to be said... if ya drop was longer i'm sure ya woulda nailed the other nine...

pretty even... i'll let someone else decides who won
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