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Old 11-07-04, 02:29 AM   #1
I. Mind
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Dabatos vs Verbal Abuse

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Topic: 10 commandments


3-0 is ko..

1 hour to spit..

And don't go easy..trust me, i ain't a newb Verbal Abuse, and i know u ain't also! I wan't to beat a vet dat tried there best, and i'll beat u only keying this also





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Old 11-07-04, 02:30 AM   #2
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Dabatos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 02:30 AM.
 
Old 11-07-04, 02:33 AM   #3
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 02:33 AM.
 
Old 11-07-04, 03:01 AM   #4
eph
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10 Commandments

Dear God,

recite these text, for God given breath and vision.
apostles listen to Jesus call and simply became family.
what is it that im missin? you were risen then decended.
clouds parted like george clooney at the grammy's.
i dont understand this vanity, my prayer is selfish.
God give me wings, so i can fly up and touch your face.

Amen.

Dear Jacob Smith,

my hands are weary, ive given up morality for truth.
souly to spread my blessing on crippled and broken youth.
id grant you ears not wings, so you wont miss my thoughts.
thoughts i voice into yours that always interprit whats lost.
because restoring your present is prior to what the future holds.
already 15, i still long to nurture you as your figure molds.
youve been through hell and its only earth, i suppose.
but your path has been in my control since birth, eyes closed.
do not fear my presence, i will always be near.
im everywhere, im even the escene behind reasons of tears.
im the sight, the thought, and sound of an ambulance.
im bliss, if i was lesser of a god i would command you once.
hints ten commandments, theres nine more your missing.
im glad to see youve got # 1 down, keep on progressing.


*i was going for more of a conversation, rather than story or complex piecing.
 
Old 11-07-04, 03:24 AM   #5
I. Mind
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Topic: 10 commandments

Ten = Ten Commandments

[Not Everyone Follows The Ten]
In this planet, It is sed many people live under the ten commandments???
They Good Christians? Then why the ten they seem not to understand it???
These hypocrites say "they've never lied, their not terrible christians"...
But they do the same unbearable sinnin, ruinin the fake faith with in em...
Catholicism! its suppost to be the largest and most known religous belief...
Supposedly are full of faithful people who still are full of riches with greed...
It's just 2 hard to believe, that they follow the ten after seein viscous police..
Who don't sin? I guess their character switches while stompin bitches with feet..
N sins again, lyin they did nothin. though they we're caught on video tape..
Caught again cheating on their wives with hoes in their very own place...

[Example of Broken Commandments]
''Though shall not lie?" but still everyone does it once in a while...
From adults to young childs, to even priests lyin in a court trials..
"shall not murder?" then why does this country send ppl to war...
When they know that death n killings is what a future war stores...
"Shal not steal?" But even innocents have to do it, jst to survive..
Even though they know it will hurt them inside ruining their pride..
"Shall not commit adultery?" This is just a life long test for all men..
Also women, but for us avoiding temptations is too hard to attempt..
People say you'll go tohell, if you break only one of these commandments..
Then I guess everyone in this world's sould are ready for complete banishment..

I basiclly keyed this! Good Luck
N shyt, i think i went too easy lol
 
Old 11-07-04, 11:09 AM   #6
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Old 11-07-04, 12:45 PM   #7
eph
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dabatos
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yea, up.

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Old 11-07-04, 01:39 PM   #8
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Old 11-07-04, 08:04 PM   #9
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Old 11-09-04, 05:28 PM   #10
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Old 11-10-04, 12:25 AM   #11
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Old 11-10-04, 07:28 PM   #12
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Old 11-16-04, 07:01 PM   #13
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Old 11-20-04, 08:12 PM   #14
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Old 11-21-04, 08:07 PM   #15
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