shit was fire...straight up u got talent
i like flipped endings and you pulled this off nice...it had one of those endings like immortal technique-dance with the devil...i thought the whole thing was great, vocab,creativity all there and i cant wait to here this on audio cuz the flow is great as well
10/10 i didnt find nothing wrong with it shit flowed and got the message/moral out

hit up my first topical on open mic too..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161856

thanks peace