werd this would be good on audio...i was feelin it pretty much, the vocab could be a little higher but u still got some and some lines were stretched on text but if this was audio i think it would be smoother...no hate on anythin tho, keep doin your thing

if u want check out my first topical and open mic i put a lot of emotion and shit in it, read all of it if u gonna check it out thanks

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161856

peace