tight shit no hate on anythin, had the ill flow,overall it would make a great song and should be put on audio, i read all of it and i never got bored...it always hooked me in and kept me on track to read the next line
if you want check out my first topical and open mic, no hate i put a lot of work into it for my first topical, thanks peace
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161856