Listening as i type
Beat is pretty coo
First... Sound young...femcee?? Presence is def there.. flow is off and on tho.. lyrics is coo.... u have a pretty nice style.. jus work on the flow
Second... that transition was coo... voice is iight... wouldnt mind hearin this with a bit more emotion... your kinna rushin a few bars.. other then that the flow is on
Third... Yeah def shinin on this... Like the lyrics ... Dope style.. A few bars are rushed....like that "ever since i been spitten shit" didnt sound as on point as everything else.. but i was def feelin your verse..
Nice drop yall... A few things to be worked on.. but i was feelin it..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=160798
Any of yall... hit that when u can.. Pz.