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Old 11-26-04, 05:41 AM   #14
Triple_N
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Ah'ight I'm dropping real feed cuz engyma is the real feed master....lol

Willa....your voice is unique, yeah somewhat young sounding but its different and different is always good, your flow is real choppy though...I think its cuz you haven't learned how to calculate ya breaths yet...I ono but u were taking badly timed pauses..and your emotion wasn't there, it was almost like u was talking but u somewhat new to this so don't get down on yourself about it cuz it was better than most new comers.

Ecko...you were rushing your lines alot, it killed your flow, u gotta shorten ya lines and manage ya syllables better...your miscounted syllables is the reason why u were stumbling on alot in ya verse, ya delivery was really blan as well, thats cuz u were rushing ya words u can't really emphasize words wit ya tongue when u gotta focus on getting out lines dat are too long.

Engyma...I see u still obsessed wit the fast flow..which is cool but the secret to making it flow smoother is throwing multies in there and changing it up...your rhyme scheme was way too consistent..and it made ya spit monotone, try throwing influctions in ya verses like saying certain words louder, or in a unique way..or write some lines to fall short of the snare so in order to make it hit snare u gotta drag out certain words...it'll make ya verses more entertaining, but it was a decent verse..I was just trying to give some helpful pointers

Decent track..I'd give it a 6.5/10...it coulda been better but fair drop all in all
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