Thread: valor vs Empire
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Old 11-27-04, 12:31 AM   #11
Wickedclown
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Voted For: Empire

oh god... i cant belive im doin this...... heres my break down............

Valor.... ya shit was good was feelin it, good wordplay and flowed quite well.... structure was hit and miss so work on that (in poetry and topicals a text battle structure isnt the best)... you stayed on topic and thats always a pluss... the creativity was good.... but could have been better.... over all u had a good verse. 7/10

Empire.... ya shit was pretty tight.... it flowed well, and wordplay was tight.. i was really feelin it.... structure was differant but i liked it, it worked well with the flow of things and it turned out pretty decent.... you stayed on the topic the whole time and your creativity was deffinitly there... it was very passionate and heart felt, good stuff... 9/10

now valor this aint a hate or DR vote... empire and i have a very shaky history, frankly i dont really like him... but i have never droped a dishonest vote and empire won this one... no hate to valor at all... you both came well and i respect that

Vote........Empire......