Voted For: teknikal vuez


METH
self inflicted wounds outloud laughter as soon as he steps in rooms...
he's a wet back like thrown water ballons kids more pussy then enternal woombs...
^^DECENT WORDPLAY .6/10.
duckin me like what if resistence ran?..existince period should be enough keep ya distince man
always feelin his taint hes got a persistint hand punchlines hit hard like o'neil an piston fans
^^again decent wordplay .5/10.
infected disease elton john reflected check his knees...kids expression sars..
rallys for disgretion for retards!.but like his rhymes neva hold up like dolly parton bras
^^ok. .5/10.

OVERALL sum decent wordplay, but ya lines were stretched.ya verse was too basic ,simple similies/wordplay in every bar.no real punches or personals....u prob can come harder than that tho.#

TEK
Your verses are wack.. leaving ~few stressed kids~
cause you like constintly failing rules, in need of ~new methods~//
^^4/10....BASIC
I ~said this, bet this~.. tell me this ~barage feels good~
and youll have more guys on the side of your house than ~garage sales in the hood~//
5/10.....BETTER
My ~stealth leaves you shook~.. you never knew ~Tek would rupture~
cause ya style abstrakt art, in desperate need of ~new structure~//
^^GUD WORDPLAY HERE 6/10
For that ~ill crush ya~.. leave ya eyes ~on the floor looking~
cause these punches light up your grill, like ~outdoor cooking~//
^^^MEH..AIGHT 5/10
leave you a ~shook being~.. I got punches. ~sick in eye stuntin~
cause Method. drops more overatted than the ~quick reply button~
^^GUD CREATIVITY 7/10
Shit ~deny something~.. Im Hot.. You ~spit in the cold~
so i put your fat on your forehead, so you ~know your role/roll~ //
^^FILLER 4/10

OVERALL. pretty basic lines.same as meth,not much in it really, but ima go wit tek 4 beta struc, flow and the most creative bar. Oh lose tha // in ya verse, peeps will put that against u.

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