that was some pretty nice shit..... i juss saw this in ur sig so i unno how old this is... did u show it to her??? cuz that shit was great.... nice metaphors and such... and u can feel the emotion in ur thing..... real good closer, u know definately how to write.... might be more of a poet than a rapper, i dont need to tell u, but keep doin ur thing anyways

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