Thread: This is My Song
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Old 12-01-04, 12:00 AM   #2
Parallel
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hmmm you need to drop more man you losen your skill i usto see...or its just that ive gotten better but still this was a good piece...

vocab: good
multis: good
wordplay: alright
on topic: yes
openers and closers: good
stucture: fell a lil but good
flow: hella ya

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