this is ok

.:.(set = dome)(cap=shoot)
^^get rid of this sorta shit,when ir ead a open mic, I spit it. Having this in there fuck's with my flow.I try spiting it,then get mixed up.

you have dope multi's. but once in a while they seem forced.

?And Mat PARS-wit-SNOW <not to sure what this mean's.

TAR-in-DOUGH<seemed forced to me.

That is the only thing i can see. The rest is dope, like your flow.good multi's.
keep dropping