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Old 12-04-04, 11:41 PM   #9
Parallel
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Voted For: Dabatos

Verbal abuse:
hmm not bad was feelin your verse just felt you didnt come as hard in the emotion or vocabulary as I Mind did...if you would of upped your vocabulary you would of had this...but not by far....i like how you both stayed on topic to but Verbal work on vocabulary...well you also had a great stucture to your verse as well and it flowed well to...good verse 8.2/10

I. Mind:
hmm good emotion came pretty tight in the 2nd verse with the vocabulary and the multis hit hard...stucture was there i couldent say this was your best but its almost there....pretty dicent peices from both of you..i just feel I Mind had better vocab and emotion to hers...8.4/10
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