Voted For: CriTiC
v/critic
super-aight u had a nice drop..........coulda been better.......you had real basic vocab.........ya structure was good tho.......nice topic ppl....................you came at this good but you lacked imagry and emotion..........and they really help a topical..............keep it up tho........and keep doin ya thing
critic-aight u came at this harder............you had a lot better vocab than super.................you had emotion and imagry more in your verse.......yours flowed welll...........you came at this just better............ya structure was aiight......i liked how u broke it into pieces...........it coveyed it more as a story.......good drop
plz return the favor...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163144
honest explained only....
peace~1