this was very close but my vote goes to premanition.

I.Mind:
you had a good peice here but what u lacked was knowledge of a lot more problems in this nation.you had a lot of good multis and i liked the flow of it.i was definatly feeling emotion out of it.but i felt like the topic could have been used better.i feel that there is much more to life then what u talked about.u pointed out important issues and all but not most of them.well it was a good verse overall.

Premanition:
I liked your verse and how u broke down the gift and the curse like that but i think what u lacked was creativity in the style u used.we all know jay z used the gift and the curse.u could have made up something else and to me i would have been more interested.but anyways u had some good imagery in this and i was feelin the vocab.your peice was more like poetry underground rap and u rhymed in complex ways.and i liked the message of your peice about life.it was basically about the beggining of life and the end.so my vote goes to u.

keep it up both of ya'll and good luck on the rest of the votes -One-

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