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Crossing the Phyco's Path
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IP:
harold gets my vote because.............
akwordz:
i didnt like the flow and structure on this and it was hard to flow with and the story line was typical. i think u should have been more creative with it but i was feelin emotion out of it which is good but just elevate on complexity and storyline creativity.
harold:
u had a good flow and structure and the vocab was decent.u werent that creative and came typical with the story line but u talked about drugs and liquor which added a spice to it.i felt the emotion in it as well....
both keep elevaten but theres my vote
vote/harold
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