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Old 12-07-04, 04:14 AM   #2
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hey Q... this was good shyt dawg... and definitely something that the world needs to hear. we accept change in so many things but when it comes to homosexuality every tries to turn a blind eye and act like it hasn't existed since the beginning of life. Out here in Iraq where religion started, it's actually a part of the culture... out here, women are for breeding and men are for everything else (truth)... we in western culture think it's the strangest thing in the world while those in the middle east actually embrace it... they show affection to each other everday... they greet each other with kisses... hold hands... and the only ones that look at them funny are Americans...

this is a very solid piece and extremely personal in nature... that's usually when true talent shines through... i admire your honesty and the emotion of this drop... everday i learn a lil something more about the world that we live in and i gain a better understanding of the people involved in it... thank you for keeping shyt real... not only to yaself but to the rest of us as well.... if more homosexuals weren't so afraid to stand up for themselves and more heterosexuals weren't so afraid of what's different then maybe we'd all be able to stand side by side and fight for the things that are really important like education for our children, homelessness, jobs, etc....

now with that said... since this is an OM i'd say that ya shoulda seperated ya lines... i thought this was a random thread at first until i got to about the middle of it... i re-read itand found the flow of the piece... the werds were nicely chosen and very effective... all lines lead into the next and it ended well... not a popular topic but one that is very necessary in today's world and also brings diversity to RV... again, great job on this ... keep doing ya thang!


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