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Old 12-07-04, 11:35 PM   #2
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FLuid i didnt like ur verse too much... seemed fake, like you forced it or something...
lyrics were OK, nothing special i guess, idk seemes slow and like you werent sure what u were doing.3.5/10
Deadly flow was good, lyrics were betta than fluids, still gotta fix those hard P's lol alot of POPS, but its koo, seemed like overall u did good 8/10
Seven had best lyrics, flow was nice and smooth, but for some reason i expected more from him. 8.5/10

Overall decent track, thought it could have been a lil betta. i say 7.5/10 overall
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