This is the finished version of the track i dropped awhile ago, its about life's struggle, listen to the words, came out pretty good, Thanks to the Fam for jumping on this one...enjoy

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/fluidmoon.htm

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

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*FluidMusic*


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FLuid i didnt like ur verse too much... seemed fake, like you forced it or something...
lyrics were OK, nothing special i guess, idk seemes slow and like you werent sure what u were doing.3.5/10
Deadly flow was good, lyrics were betta than fluids, still gotta fix those hard P's lol alot of POPS, but its koo, seemed like overall u did good 8/10
Seven had best lyrics, flow was nice and smooth, but for some reason i expected more from him. 8.5/10

Overall decent track, thought it could have been a lil betta. i say 7.5/10 overall
JUst honest feedback, no beef or hard feelings.
holla! 1

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1st...This is iight. Quality sounds shaky....like theres a lotta reverb or something.. I cant call it... flow isnt exactly on... sounds more like some spoken word shit actually... I like your voice tho
I was expecting a hook
2nd. Pretty coo shit... those pops are vicious lol.... I dont like how the flow sounds almost cut and pasted?? I dont know how else to describe it... Def good energy tho..
3rd. Cool Delivery real laid back.... flow could have been a bit stronger... almost sounded like you were reading it off paper.... Lyrics were strong tho... Dope voice

Decent track .. Room for improvment but still pretty good..

Pz.

holy fuck i love this beat...

fluid...choppy in parts, but i'm liking this flow, sounds a lil forced in one part, but lyrically it was pretty good, your quality was still a little bad, although its getting better...good job

seven...it was pretty good, flow was decent...but i sounds like you record line by line, its just chopped up or something, sounds weird...decent drop though, not great for you though, you've done much better...

deadly...you shined, yur shit was the best on here by far...flow is getting ridiculous, and you have your own style, its nice

decent to pretty good track...i'd woulda liked a common like chorus, but its all good

~7/10

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fluid- flow and delivery was decent lyrics were st8 quality needs a bit of work otha then tha nice ish

seven third-flow and delivery were nice like they said tho lol had a few pops nuttin major tho lyrics was nice nice over-all mayne

deadly- flow and delivery were nice man lyrics was nice to quality sounded the best to me must have a decent mic feeling your verse the most

fuck over-all this was dope beat was chill i liked it Daps fam -UnO-

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1st fluidmoon........i realy dont like ur flow on this track...its like u slow down and go fast and ur voice is mono tone u dont really show emotion..ur voice is unique nowadays everyone sounds like lil kim lol.... lyrics i was feeling it....u basically had a str8 verse jus work on ur quality and u'd be safe.....6.5/10

2nd Key Rogue (DV) ur quality sounds nice to me except ur P's they got big pops on them when u first started when u sed "Hard times....yea" when u had the echo its like it just cut that off...it woulda sounded better if u let the echo finish....u got nice lyrics...a lot of emotion nice....the only problem is that it sounds like u record line for line thats the only problem guess thats ur style...yea but other then that ur verse is safe i think u shined on this track gud job 8.5/10

3rd SevenThird ur quality is cool ur emotion coulda been better but it was safe....ur verse was like all multies u should mix it up more but with not so much multies like this verse....lyrics was coo.... ur voice is coo overall safe verse 7.5/10

overall this was a nice track 7/10 stay up

Word

Props

My Nizo

Mite be my quality line fo line shit..

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