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Old 12-10-04, 04:22 AM   #6
iamthatdude87
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1st fluidmoon........i realy dont like ur flow on this track...its like u slow down and go fast and ur voice is mono tone u dont really show emotion..ur voice is unique nowadays everyone sounds like lil kim lol.... lyrics i was feeling it....u basically had a str8 verse jus work on ur quality and u'd be safe.....6.5/10

2nd Key Rogue (DV) ur quality sounds nice to me except ur P's they got big pops on them when u first started when u sed "Hard times....yea" when u had the echo its like it just cut that off...it woulda sounded better if u let the echo finish....u got nice lyrics...a lot of emotion nice....the only problem is that it sounds like u record line for line thats the only problem guess thats ur style...yea but other then that ur verse is safe i think u shined on this track gud job 8.5/10

3rd SevenThird ur quality is cool ur emotion coulda been better but it was safe....ur verse was like all multies u should mix it up more but with not so much multies like this verse....lyrics was coo.... ur voice is coo overall safe verse 7.5/10

overall this was a nice track 7/10 stay up
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