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Old 12-10-04, 07:19 PM   #12
Elemental Soul
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Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

ill breakdown:
Lame-Dick, But Still Talk Shit, Think You So Ill? Well Then, Dawg Heres-A-Kick//
Cuz The Only Time That Your "Mentally-Ill" Is When Your "Brains-Sick"//(1)
played concept and very stretched out but decent punch
Flow-Is-Weak,Beatin Me?Why Do You Even Speak, Deserve Ta-Get-Beat//
So I'll Rip The "Cents/Sense" Through Ya "Mouth", Cuz Ya "Talk-Is-Cheap"//(2)
decent nice wordplay but still very strecthed
I "Side-Kick" Ya Face, And Commense Ta Rip-Ya-Maze,Dawg Ur Outta Place//
So I Tear-Ya-Legs And Remove Your "Mobil"-ity Cuz I Can Kill You In "3 Ways"//(3)
very strecthed but this is the best punch in your verse,nice wordplay here.

your verse was overall decent,but u came stretched.but u made up for being stretched by comen with some good multis.

mental:

im all vet...im here for everyone to look at like a wall sketch...
ur verses are basic...ive seen larger bars in cages for small pets/
selfglorifying at first but good punch
bitch u aint all that...i'm in all black like adidas wit no stripes...
ur recievin tha L right?..have a heart..and take tha beatin of ur life/
weak punch and kind of stretched,and first line was selfglorifying without connecting
writin ur name beside me is tha only way ur next to me chump...
plex wit me punk?..i'll walk on ya lines as if i was gettin tested for drunk
nice multis and creative punch
let's get serious...cus when i show tha tek u get nervous...
ya chest burstin..i'll cure ur heat like i was voted best of the nurses/
nice multis but kind of weak

overall decent verse.......

this is a close battle but im going with logic because he had better punches.even tho he was stretched he made up for it with multis.mentally had some good punches but he was selfglorifying at some points which killed it.so my vote goes to....
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