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Old 12-13-04, 11:37 PM   #2
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O aight fam i sense your feelings on this piece.....upp your vocab.....your expression was beautifully nice......use like meta'z........more creativity....give this an 7/10 upp vocab.....struture......meta'z.....and use more creativity


Dont take this in a wrong way (7/10) it was an good piece 1


plz drop an feedback in my om.......The link Its Under my Sig


i'll appreciated
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