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Old 12-15-04, 08:19 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for SPuL

IP:

voted spul:

punches were better, wordplay was decent, ya had some good perosnals. some lines were a little jumbly, but for the most part, you had a straight verse, ending was aight, the opener was good, identikal was too stretched, that was his main weakness, needs some improvement, not horrible, just decent. vote is still spul.

close battle.