i was feelin this beat..... but ur really off in the beginnin....... u get comfortable in the middle, but its still alil weird at some parts.... might wanna record ur shit again and again, or separate ur parts more...... sounds like it might only be two takes u got there.... but pretty decent.... may wanna add in a hook and make it a single... whered u get that beat??? or did u make it..... ohhh and ur vocals were juss alil too loud, but nothin too bad..... the quality of it was worse.... id give it a 6.. but it could be a 7 or 8 with a dope hook on it..

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