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Old 12-18-04, 08:20 PM   #11
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i agree with jpoll on LE's verse

the chorus was horrible, and i couldnt even hear wat lady fiya was sayin.....i suggest slowin it down for the chorus, or atleast makin it louder...

20 grand was better on this than most, ur flow seemed fine, onbeat most the time..... decent lyrics, but i personally never think ur lyrics are that great

God damn.... Y u always gotta have the last part Enygma to kill everyone elses verse.... straight fiya... i like ur really fast flow, and u keep it consistent is wat makes it good..... although switchin up the flow alil bit sometimes isnt that bad..... best lyrics + good flow by u = a 6 for this track

fix that chorus and itd prolly be a 7 or 8
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