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Old 12-19-04, 01:01 AM   #4
Parallel
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SuperVilain:
i had no clue you write all these lines that dont make sense...but no hate but you need elevation work on the wordplay try using a better flow to in your verse because you kinda fucked uo on the flow a bit...the stucture was iight kinda fell a little bit towards the middle...but stucture was good..overal...7.2/10

Critic:
not the best ive seen from you but it was pretty dope...nice use of multis and vocabulary...nice wordplay in your lines very well done stucture with a super good flow with it to...nice verse is all i can say you take this with ease...

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return the favour here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159763
hopefully you understand my punches cuz half the people dont..
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