Odi et Amo
|
IP:
Voted For: Terror2005
Legend
You just another fake emcee just trying his very best but failing to be me
I got funk and goin against me you got some spunk. But I’m still too groovy.
^wasn't really feeling your opener...
liked first line but second one killed it for me
Before every battle you have to pray in these hopeful helping revivals.
While my rhymes reek with talent your fake ass skillz are shit in pilez.
^nice one...
Only sucking lyricalflowz dick is your only life satisfaction. That’s your end
Now we all tell not ask your ass to depart because all you do is lyrically descend
^kinda fucked up with using only twice
and i dunno but there's something wrong in the way you worded that last line
Your lines were really long, vocab was nice but didn't find anything in there that was really hardhitting or bold...work on that...but decent drop, just not really feeling it i guess
Terror 2005
Sayin i stole his crews name, now that's gay//
when my crew recieved more members in less days//
^uhm, aight opener i guess
Your style is tastless like a sugar free milkshake//
'truth be told' your as worthless as the threads you make//
^decent
Being as whack as you, should be the 11th sin//
seems to me you get on here just to promote your girlfriend//
^liked this
I spit so much fire, you should consider it "Fire-print"//
This legend really needs to consider early retirement//
^nah, didnt do trick for me
Dawg your rhymes are nothing to me like a low whisper//
You incest fucker, why you posting nudes of your sister?//
^good...
You trying to be updated with all that street slang//
Ill tie you by your throat from a ceiling so you can "hang"//
^haha, def. nice closer
Maybe improve your vocab, make it lil more complex but you had some nice punches and personals in there...good drop for sure
__________________
Authentik Intelligence
...The future is mine...
|