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Old 12-18-04, 04:12 PM   #1
8-B@LL
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From: West Virginia
Legend vs Terror2005

IP: B20E EBF9

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Check in by: 12-18-04 at 07:12 PM

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Closed.. old expired battle win
 
Old 12-18-04, 04:13 PM   #2
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Terror2005 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 04:13 PM.
 
Old 12-18-04, 04:52 PM   #3
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Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-04 04:52 PM.
 
Old 12-18-04, 06:04 PM   #4
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You just another fake emcee just trying his very best but failing to be me
I got funk and goin against me you got some spunk. But I’m still too groovy.
Before every battle you have to pray in these hopeful helping revivals.
While my rhymes reek with talent your fake ass skillz are shit in pilez.
Only sucking lyricalflowz dick is your only life satisfaction. That’s your end
Now we all tell not ask your ass to depart because all you do is lyrically descend
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Old 12-18-04, 07:49 PM   #5
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From: West Virginia
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Sayin i stole his crews name, now that's gay//
when my crew recieved more members in less days//

Your style is tastless like a sugar free milkshake//
'truth be told' your as worthless as the threads you make//

Being as whack as you, should be the 11th sin//
seems to me you get on here just to promote your girlfriend//

I spit so much fire, you should consider it "Fire-print"//
This legend really needs to consider early retirement//

Dawg your rhymes are nothing to me like a low whisper//
You incest fucker, why you posting nudes of your sister?//

You trying to be updated with all that street slang//
Ill tie you by your throat from a ceiling so you can "hang"//
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Old 12-18-04, 07:51 PM   #6
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uppin dis bitch honest votes only.............~1~
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Old 12-19-04, 01:55 AM   #7
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Upping this battle nigka's. That verse sucked. Bitch.
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Old 12-19-04, 01:26 PM   #8
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Voted For: Terror2005

Legend

You just another fake emcee just trying his very best but failing to be me
I got funk and goin against me you got some spunk. But I’m still too groovy.
^wasn't really feeling your opener...
liked first line but second one killed it for me

Before every battle you have to pray in these hopeful helping revivals.
While my rhymes reek with talent your fake ass skillz are shit in pilez.
^nice one...

Only sucking lyricalflowz dick is your only life satisfaction. That’s your end
Now we all tell not ask your ass to depart because all you do is lyrically descend
^kinda fucked up with using only twice
and i dunno but there's something wrong in the way you worded that last line

Your lines were really long, vocab was nice but didn't find anything in there that was really hardhitting or bold...work on that...but decent drop, just not really feeling it i guess


Terror 2005

Sayin i stole his crews name, now that's gay//
when my crew recieved more members in less days//
^uhm, aight opener i guess

Your style is tastless like a sugar free milkshake//
'truth be told' your as worthless as the threads you make//
^decent

Being as whack as you, should be the 11th sin//
seems to me you get on here just to promote your girlfriend//
^liked this

I spit so much fire, you should consider it "Fire-print"//
This legend really needs to consider early retirement//
^nah, didnt do trick for me

Dawg your rhymes are nothing to me like a low whisper//
You incest fucker, why you posting nudes of your sister?//
^good...

You trying to be updated with all that street slang//
Ill tie you by your throat from a ceiling so you can "hang"//
^haha, def. nice closer

Maybe improve your vocab, make it lil more complex but you had some nice punches and personals in there...good drop for sure
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Old 12-19-04, 06:15 PM   #9
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uppin dis bitch lets get some more honest votes......~1~
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Old 12-19-04, 07:14 PM   #10
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Nice verse man. I'll have a remacth with you and win that time. I juast tjough you were another newbie. so I took you lightly. But lets have a rtematch. I';ll merk you I garantee.
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Old 12-19-04, 10:05 PM   #11
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uppin dis bitch lets get some more honest votes......~1~
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Old 12-20-04, 03:05 PM   #12
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yo uppin dis shit lets get some votes come on RV dont sleep......~1~ favor will be returned
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Old 12-20-04, 06:46 PM   #13
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uppin dis bitch lets get some votes in people honest votes only.......~1~
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Old 12-21-04, 02:57 PM   #14
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uppin dis shit honest votes only...........~1~ ill return da favor ASAP
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Black Queen
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Old 12-21-04, 03:59 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for Terror2005

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Sayin i stole his crews name, now that's gay//
when my crew recieved more members in less days//
^^weak ...okay opener
Your style is tastless like a sugar free milkshake//
'truth be told' your as worthless as the threads you make//
^^weak
Being as whack as you, should be the 11th sin//
seems to me you get on here just to promote your girlfriend//
^^okay personal
I spit so much fire, you should consider it "Fire-print"//
This legend really needs to consider early retirement//
^^good punch
Dawg your rhymes are nothing to me like a low whisper//
You incest fucker, why you posting nudes of your sister?//
^^god personal
You trying to be updated with all that street slang//
Ill tie you by your throat from a ceiling so you can "hang"//
^^decent punch

aight you came harder with punches and personals........your vocab was basic and get rid of the // after the lines its herbish........but you came weak think out your punches a lil more and try to make your personals a punch so it hits harder..and make em more direct......

You just another fake emcee just trying his very best but failing to be me
I got funk and goin against me you got some spunk. But I’m still too groovy.
^^weak opener and had self glorification
Before every battle you have to pray in these hopeful helping revivals.
While my rhymes reek with talent your fake ass skillz are shit in pilez.
^^again self gloricication.. no punch really
Only sucking lyricalflowz dick is your only life satisfaction. That’s your end
Now we all tell not ask your ass to depart because all you do is lyrically descend
^^okay punch....weak tho

you cam really really weak ive seen you better than this...so it kinda dissapoints me.......but too much self glorification man you dont need it in a battle verse your supposed to focus on making the other person look bad by throwin punches not talking bout how nice you are......you had decent vocab and your flow lacked.......good structure..........but this was a weak battle

v/terror2005 for better punches/personals

dont have 200 posts but its how i see it
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