Sayin i stole his crews name, now that's gay//
when my crew recieved more members in less days//
^^weak ...okay opener
Your style is tastless like a sugar free milkshake//
'truth be told' your as worthless as the threads you make//
^^weak
Being as whack as you, should be the 11th sin//
seems to me you get on here just to promote your girlfriend//
^^okay personal
I spit so much fire, you should consider it "Fire-print"//
This legend really needs to consider early retirement//
^^good punch
Dawg your rhymes are nothing to me like a low whisper//
You incest fucker, why you posting nudes of your sister?//
^^god personal
You trying to be updated with all that street slang//
Ill tie you by your throat from a ceiling so you can "hang"//
^^decent punch

aight you came harder with punches and personals........your vocab was basic and get rid of the // after the lines its herbish........but you came weak think out your punches a lil more and try to make your personals a punch so it hits harder..and make em more direct......

You just another fake emcee just trying his very best but failing to be me
I got funk and goin against me you got some spunk. But I’m still too groovy.
^^weak opener and had self glorification
Before every battle you have to pray in these hopeful helping revivals.
While my rhymes reek with talent your fake ass skillz are shit in pilez.
^^again self gloricication.. no punch really
Only sucking lyricalflowz dick is your only life satisfaction. That’s your end
Now we all tell not ask your ass to depart because all you do is lyrically descend
^^okay punch....weak tho

you cam really really weak ive seen you better than this...so it kinda dissapoints me.......but too much self glorification man you dont need it in a battle verse your supposed to focus on making the other person look bad by throwin punches not talking bout how nice you are......you had decent vocab and your flow lacked.......good structure..........but this was a weak battle

v/terror2005 for better punches/personals

dont have 200 posts but its how i see it

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