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Old 12-23-04, 01:13 AM   #14
Ike
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Voted For: J~FOUR

j four........
1st bar-decent punch...like how you played off of his name...hit semi hard
2nd bar-lol again good play off name...decent personal....could have been worded better..but hit kinda hard
3rd bar-good personal....hit hard...best bar in the battle in my opinion.....
overall- should have made it a couple more lines....it almost cost you....also try to use more multis in your verse...that would help alot....but overall decent verse...

flex.......
1st bar-hmm kinda self glorifying and it was streched....didnt hit very hard.....decent vocab though
2nd bar-again didnt hit very hard....didnt like it that much...sorry just wasnt feelin it
3rd bar-lol made me laugh....decent punch...could have been worded a lil better...but hit kinda hard
4th bar-self glorifying...garbage line
5th bar-played...hit semi hard though...not too great
overall.....i felt like your punches just didnt hit very hard at all....use more multis and that will help out...and work on your punches and meta...also work on wordplay and how to word the lines.....good drop

i voted for j four because his punches hit harder....and he stayed consistent with his punches....where flex didnt.....and i also felt like he played off of flexs name nicely.....
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