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Old 12-23-04, 09:35 PM   #2
Def by Mouf
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this was an alright drop....u shouldn't stretch your vereses out so much and but you had creativty but I wasn't really feelin the emotion here...I dunno why but I wasn't feelin like you put effort into this but anyways keep droppin and i look forward to seein you grow and your bars shorten...another thing that you could improve on is the multis and vocab...I mean you had a few here and there but...a few don't do much good and your vocab was okay but....u used uncommon words but they werent like ooo's an aaaaa's ya know....peaceezy
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