Voted For: J~FOUR

structure j flexu need to work on ur strcture its important in text
flow tie although j was more complex
personals j flex u need to work on this also thats what wins battles
punches j by a lil flex looked like he prewrote adn both tried to come gangster u shouldnt do that on the net
overall j
flew elevate work on ur structure and drop personals no hate good battles just elevate

please RETURN THE FAVOR
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...242#post1840242
and drop another link i will vote on any links droped in the battle if u vote ppl like to sleep around here