some pretty deep shit i must say......... great topic.... i thought the multies were kinda good but always make sure the multie isnt just there for the rhyming, but helps with the mood or the point ur makin in the verse (i thought u did this pretty well in most cases)

the flow was pretty good, in large part to the multies.... especially since they were always placed in the same section of the line everytime..... u had good vocab and i dint see many ways u could improve it, if any.... i like the question part too......... ahhh i really cant find much to improve on..... wat u were talkin about is good, but its not followed throughout the verse...... (about talkin to god)....... it doesnt seem like ur talkin to god throughout the whole thing...... but w/e........ its dope besides that

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