hahaha funny piece, and very interesting, I've never read something like this so its kind of hard to give my opinion or criticism, I liked it though, funny lines and pretty good flow, hahaTook a train to Minnisota/
Met my nigga Yoda/
I asked him, ''Hows Mr. Randy/
''Well sir, he's just dandy/
We can criss-cross like Randy Moss/
We's a big fella, he's a hoss
Nice, I guess my criticism is elevate your vocabularity a bit, but otherwise good drop
