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Old 01-06-05, 09:45 PM   #5
FlowIntelligent.
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this was a good piece...

anxiety: your whole verse flowed i dont think there was one spot where it fell off.. the whole verse also had good wordplay and the structure was good... good emotion and depth dope verse from you

final: you chose the right person to mentor you, one of the best, and i guarantee he will get you up to his level.. you already taking after his tyle... good flow and good wordplay for most of the verse..

you guys took it to another level

dope piece

9.5/10
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