anxeity:
damn you came tight i like the reason how you talked about how you helped final out on his elevation and all that....you came super tight with the creativty...i seen a quite a bit of wordplay and creaivty in your lines..very nice...good vocabulary and your stucture and flow were very nicly done....good job...8.4/10

Final:
i liked your lines as well i liked how you talked about how if people try there hardest they will get what they want...as you did..i really liked the creativty you used...some nice lines in there with soem godo wordplay in there n stuff...and damn your vocabulary was done well...and your stcuture and flow were great as well...keep it up...8.3/10

favorite lines:
anxeity:
Which ya wont, i mean it's gotta be damn near impossible...
But often you'll, think you passed the last obsticle...

Final:
ive got to get a grip and be beware of the challenges
that become visible to us...like sex after marriages

drop feed in my single unsuitable life....its in the sig...welll it will be in a sec...

-parallel