queen:
came very well good stucture and you were pretty creative in there..used some very nice flowing and you were so creative with the lines it was like wordplay it was actually..lmao..but you also used a few of multis...idk you jsut came very creative not really any good vocabulary but the rest was good...8.1/10

Mista:
shit you gettin better even tho this wasent the best ive seen from you it was alright try using vocab more same with queen...if you used vocab it would be more emotional...you know...but your stucture was good tell the end it kinda fucked same with queens...but the flow was good and your were creartive and emotional about it...good job..8.2/10

return the favour in the sig...pz

-Parallel