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Old 01-08-05, 02:15 AM   #8
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Voted For: Garanteed

first off Guaranteed needs to fix his link... finally gotta hold of the actual one.....

ok.....

Presense and emotion: the emotion wasnt that great for G but Acuity wasnt great either.... however, G had much better presence, that made up for the lack of alotta emotion....... v/G

flow- i think that G had that on lock...... more of west coast feel..... not alotta rushin.. lil off, but decent overall
..... however, thisd is wat Acuity needs the most help in.... the end of lines were rushed..... wen i viewed the lyrics i saw the words u were tryna rhyme together, but they always seemed on the wrong beat or off beat in general..... i unno if its ur style, but i dont like it..... also, somewhere midway through ur verse u seem to go like 6 lines without rhymin....... v/G

Punches..... i believe this was a tie..... cuz Acuity had some ok lines, but they were worded horriblyi think like the Apollo Creed one...... while Guaranteed had some good ones.... but u sometimes had the punch where the setup shoulda been.... like the hung jury opne from wat i can remember

Quality: doesnt need much explainin....... sory Acuity, but Gauaranteed took this one the easiest... i had to read ur verse to understand it, and it wasnt just because of the accent..... the vocals were screwed and wasnt very ckear

blah........... this battle was aight...... nothin special..... only drawback for G for me was that it was so fuckin short....... sorry Acuity.. i cant give it to u..... i shouldnt have to listen to ur verse like 4 times without seein the lyrics.... u did good... and ur lyrics were good enough... but u needa up ur flow and presence up majorly

vote/ Guarantees
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