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Old 01-08-05, 08:30 PM   #15
TeamOne
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that was really deep shit man... somethin peeps can really relate to in ur stituation....
u had really nice multis that did NOT take away from ur verse or got u off topic.... in some parts it had a unique rhyme scheme that made it really good to me..... i was feelin the beginnin part about the clothes and keepin the big coat on in the summer...... had nice metas in it...... u also did one of the best jobs at closin each of ur verses with great quotable lines.... dope overall...... im not good at leavin ratings, but its somewhere between 8.5 and 10 definetely...... dont leave us man!
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