...Really great piece here guys...
The wording you used in here was really good
The flow was on point and the emotion was strong
Topic was different then most of the pieces i see in here
Keep at it and eventually you'll be as good as me

But nah seriously this was a really solid piece i give both of you props on this

Deffintly nominating it for OM of the month


and yeah return favor on my poem Imperfection