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IP:
Woooooow, Its Been A Long Time Since I'v Read Poetry...
And This Was A Great Way Get Get Back Into It...
I've Actually Never Read Anything From You Before But You're Very Talented...
Aiight On To Some Critiques And Ish...
You're Vocab Was Amazing...
People Say My Vocab Is Endless And You Had My Reaching For A Dictionary At Times...
The Emotion Of The Whole Piece Was Insane...
The Stength In The Emotion Kept My Interest In The Piece...
Cuz Everyline's Deph Grew Greater Than Its Predasessor...
Very Nice Mayn I Loved That...
The Concept Of The Piece Was Also Very Tite...
The Whole Idea Of Idecision, The Search For Identity, The Defence Of Identity...
Some Really Deep Subjects That Were Touched Here...
And I Think You Carried The Whole Idea Of Everything Perfectly...
There Is Nothing I Can Complain About Here...
The Whole Piece Was Pretty Flawless...
I Like How You Arent A Fag And Didnt Tryn Rhym Every Line...
Rv Tends To Do That For Some Reason...
Even Though Thats Technically Poetry, But I See It More As Topical Writing...
Again, Very Nice Piece Mayn...
Stay Up And Keep Doing What Your Doing...
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