aight man..this was a nice drop.....the concept was good...and it was real...which i loved about it....was really feelin the pain in there....wot u been through and stuff...and tlkin bout ya life n stuff...overall this was good to read...the only thing i will say is tht ur structure was off...u need to keep ya lines about the same lenght..or at least the bars......people will enjoy it more then cos they can catch a flow n makes it easier to read...but u'll pick up on tht...anyway.....part from tht..good job..ama keep a lookout for more stuff from u...keep em comin man..pz

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