aight..i was feelin this drop...first off.....the structure was spot on....made it so easy to read.....as for your verse.....the concept was good....dnt think i seen one like tht before...it was real..people will feel tht...some of your vocab was brilliant too...some nice use of wordz in there.....overall a very good drop...ama rate this one...errrrr..9/10...ama keep an eye out for more ur work too...keep em comin mah...pz
return the favour with some feed in ma open mic to if you dont mind please....
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