dayum u put sum serious emotion into this poem.. highlights:

But if I can do that then why am I so blind to everything else
Lately I guess I’ve been different, not quite myself
Times are hard but they can only get worse
Worse than the horrible day they called birth
With all this stuff going on I have no life to inherit
I really wish my birth would’ve been a miscarriage
^^nice flow to these, but the content and wordage and all was nice.. i was really feelin this.. i read another "why" poem recently from the poetic scriptures forum, i thought it would be similar but it wasn't.. props, i liked this line also..

You remain important to me since you stood by me thru my problems
Didn't look at me weird if i was a little stressed you just said everyone gots um
^^nice.. nice drop overall.. stay up.. pz

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