this is ok shit....but you can elevate a lot.....i can tell you tried to get deep emotion in this one.....but it went on and off....i could've swore you bit in this but maybe it wasn't intended i dunno

Can ya picture this

movie called the Prison Song when the dude is rappin outside but i dunno what he says after "Can ya picture this "

and

i aint affraid to die i wanna see whats after this

2 Pac + Outlawz CD

Song-You Can Be Touched

7/10
return the favor in my Open Mics
but overall i can tell you a beginner so keep elevating

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