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01-14-05, 01:45 AM | #1 | |||||||
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TAKE A SEC BEFOR YA READ?
PUT THIS IN YOUR PRESPECTIVE AN SEE IF YA CAN FELATE TO IT IN ANY WAY [FEED BACK WOULD BE NICE THA FAVOUR WILL BE RETURNED] Can ya picture this catchin up ta god quicker than this an wounderin if ya were ever missed? somthin like i wish ta end it all... a few words said on a mic tha next day ya get a call, shit i should have kept my mouth shut. now im bein sued for not breakin a law? ahhhhhhhhhh god dammit haven flash backs of someone runnin up in my house never got tha chance ta blast back or knock em' out tell me what lifes about , if ya wanna rap ya gotta have a reason worlds being ripted up how's a brotha sappose ta keep breathin, somtimes i dont think iv'e got tha strenght,,,spittin out crazy rhymes in three miniutes forty seconds in lenght.......... my eyes might decieve me, believe me but i look at all artist 's deeply wounderin how things got tuned around. some of there reasons ta write, half of them could have joined a circius an become tha town's clown right? some of us are here on a money mission, that doesnt make scence to some of us how are still around only tha good ones are missin. i aint affraid to die i wanna see whats after this tell my family i said goodbye [FONT=Times New Roman]AN DONT CRY I LEFT U WITH THIS [SIZE=3] MY WORDS CB83
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01-14-05, 02:01 AM | #2 | |||||||
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this is ok shit....but you can elevate a lot.....i can tell you tried to get deep emotion in this one.....but it went on and off....i could've swore you bit in this but maybe it wasn't intended i dunno
Can ya picture this movie called the Prison Song when the dude is rappin outside but i dunno what he says after "Can ya picture this " and i aint affraid to die i wanna see whats after this 2 Pac + Outlawz CD Song-You Can Be Touched 7/10 return the favor in my Open Mics but overall i can tell you a beginner so keep elevating
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01-14-05, 02:04 AM | #3 | |||||||
Detrimental Thoughts
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01-14-05, 01:43 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Meara and Megyn
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