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Old 01-16-05, 01:43 PM   #11
Logic The Goonie
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Ehhhh nobody had any quotables to me. Skriptz I swear to God listen to me...You need to flip your lines into punches. They are weak as fuck. Example:
This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back
This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec...
............................................but it still means your wack

That was gay. All you did was call him whack very simply. Say something like....

First he said he's retired, then all of a sudden hes back
Making new names for high records...and they're all WHACK

Eh that was quick but you get the idea. Get more complex and stop being so straight forward. Hip you need to read more battles and just elvate completely cuz that shit was garbo.

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