poetry expression of words processed among paper or in this case an internet site... lol
i think you didnt fall of of topic seems as how you dont really have a topic, this peice is kind of a mixture of thoughts mixed together, thats what i perceive when i read this, for your first poem id have to say "not bad"... there was some technicality and some other ish expressed through this peice overall... not bad...
Quote:
Love for self,one another,people in general
but when used for the wrong cause
love can also be hate
love for money,power,control lust and greed
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agreed ^
neway keep droppin str8 heat...
Peace...