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Old 01-13-05, 04:28 AM   #1
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random thought's(first poem ever written)

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Ok Im unsure if this is even a poem. i have never written one before in my life. This is a first. so any feed,critism anything you thought while reading this please tell me. how else will I learn?



RANDOM THOUGHTS




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If it was ever true,what you eat is what you are
then most are destined to become something ugly
ugly isnt smiled apon,god doesnt like it
But if you were to eat healthy,reversing your destiny
then a smile will be brought apon you


A shining light doesnt allway's mean warmth
while a shining smile allway's means love


love is interprited in many ways


Love for self,one another,people in general
but when used for the wrong cause
love can also be hate
love for money,power,control lust and greed

if you find yourself slipping into a darkness
It's not hard to turn on the light
If you find the light isnt working
a little more effort may bring a new bulb

courage can be more than doing somthing your afraid of
it could also be courage of definition's
staying socially aware,not letting one be treated less
staying in a rite frame of mind
never turn off the light.
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