Lemme give some feed on another dope drop...

First of all, the topic has been done before probably and yet, you managed to give it an original vibe. Your vocab was excellent, no complex dictionary words but no basic stuff either...found a good balance there. Was feeling your flow, the structure was tight too. I absolutely LOVED the twist at the ending, the emotion was so raw. Easy to relate to because everyone must've experienced this in some sort of way, not being able to let someone go...

Good job! Keep on dropping, I'll be looking forward to reading it!

DQ

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